Procedural Writing

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 Procedural Writing

This week we had to write instructions for 'How to make a six brick structure". Mrs Dinniss reviewed what is needed in this type of writing.
1. A title about what we are writing about
2. Materials or ingredients (detailed instructions of amounts or in this case colours of bricks)
3. Step-by-step explicit (word of the week) details.

We learned very quickly that the editing process was our friend as what we wrote wasn't always what we meant.
It caused some very funny moments.






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